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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:04, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:04, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • The poster's non-free use rationale looks good.
  • Couldn't find any issues with the infobox.
  • Add a comma after Aishwarya Rai Bachchan.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:09, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after Smita Jaykar.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:09, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "read it for" → "reading it for"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:09, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove the comma after "second time".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:09, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove the comma after "May 2001".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:09, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "did an extensive" → "did extensive"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:09, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "Film City".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:09, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Indian film of the year" → "Indian films of the year"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:09, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "Best Actress (Rai Bachchan)".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:09, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Plot and cast

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  • Plot is 629 words, so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
  • Couldn't find any issues with the cast section.

Production

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Development

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  • In the caption, change "read" to "reading".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:10, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "explained of how" → "explained how"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:10, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Try reducing the amounts of quotes in that first paragraph.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:10, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "to made a film" → "to make a film"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:10, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "love to the film" → "love for the film"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:10, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "found resemblance" → "found a resemblance"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:10, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "read it entirely for the first" → "read it entirely for the first time"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:10, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "he is shown finish" → "he is shown finishing"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:10, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Casting

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  • Add a comma after Aishwarya Rai Bachchan.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "appear" → "appeared"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "specially" → "specifically"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "third films" → "third film"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "romantics" → "romantic films"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is there a word missing between "former features as Devdas".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "Smita Jaykar".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The sentence starting with "After Kher was cast" needs to be reworded (it's a bit confusing).
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after Manoj Bajpayee.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sets

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  • "film sets" → "film is set"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "an extensive research" → "extensive research"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "different set design" → "different set designs"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "Devdas' house".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "twenty five" → "twenty-five"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Characters

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  • Add a comma after Reza Shariffi.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the crews watch" → "the crews watched"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "was western look" → "was a western look"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "handkerchief".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "white".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "dhoti".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "decided to do not watch" → "decided to not watch"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "chudipards".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "brocades".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Filming

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  • "latter done the research" → "latter did research"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after Vaibhavi Merchant.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "burnt for three" → "burnt three"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "two crews had" → "two crew members had"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "one died" → "one dying"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "was seriously" → "being seriously"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "trying help" → "trying to help"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Change both uses of "was shot" to "were shot".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • I don't think "audiography" is a word.
Yes, it is. I have linked the word to its Wikipedia article. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Music

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  • Make this section a subsection under production per WP:FILMMUSIC.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "had gave" → "had given"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:17, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Other than that, this section looks good.

Release and reception

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Marketing and release

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  • Remove both uses of "finally".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "filmed for several" → "filmed several"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "a auditorium" → "an auditorium"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "faced several postponement" → "facing several postponements"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "on July 2002" → "in July 2002"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "versions was released" → "versions were released"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Critical response

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  • Add a comma after "story, sets".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "was brilliantly directed" → "had brilliantly directed"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "express" → "expressed"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Box office

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  • Add a comma after "narrative style".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "on the next week" → "in the next week"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Awards and nominations

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  • "to ask their helps" → "to ask for their help"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove the comma after "48th Filmfare Awards".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Legacy

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  • "several listing" → "several listings"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "of properties" → "of the properties"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "auction website" → "auction websites"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Talked to" → "Talking to"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "On late March 2003" → "In late March 2003"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "re-exhibited by on August" → "re-exhibited in August"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "works has been" → "works have been" or "work has been"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:18, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

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  • Archive all archivable sources (either manually or with this tool).

Progress

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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