Talk:Destination X (2005)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 15:18, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 15:18, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful, I got a good reviewer.--WillC 21:09, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:

• "which he has sustained" had sustained.
• "whoever the winning team represented," no comma needed here.
• "building, when" building. When
• "The second stage was a Three Way match," no comma needed
• "B.G James," B.G.

Just a bit of copyediting needed. I'll put the article on hold and pass when it's fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:58, 13 October 2011 (UTC)

Comment – Fixed the grammar and punctuation errors. Del_♉sion23 (talk) 00:50, 14 October 2011 (UTC)

I believe they are all fixed now.--WillC 01:23, 14 October 2011 (UTC)

Looks good; article passed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 02:10, 14 October 2011 (UTC)

Nice, and thanks for the review man.--WillC 06:40, 15 October 2011 (UTC)