Talk:Desde un Principio: From the Beginning/GA1
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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 20:40, 30 September 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for reviewing my FLC for Selena, in return I will review this article. Best, Jonatalk to me 20:40, 30 September 2012 (UTC)
- Fixed.
- Infobox
- The "length" section needs a {{duration}} template
Done
- Lead
- You know Billboard needs to be in italics ;)
Done I didn't know that it also applies to the music awards as well.
- Numbers needs to comply with WP:ORDINAL
Done
- "and was named the best-selling album of 2000 on both." --> "and became the best-selling album of 2000 on both charts."
Done
- Too many sentences start with "It"
Doneish. I used some variations, but I think I might need help on this one.
- The RIAA needs to be spelled out completely
Done
- Content
- Overlinking found (Contra la Corriente)
Done Removed second instance.
- ""No Me Ames" (Track 1) is a duet with Jennifer Lopez - Lopez included it her debut album On The 6)." ---> "The opener, a tropical version of "No Me Ames", is a duet with American singer and actress Jennifer Lopez; she included the recording on her debut album On The 6 (1999)". Remember not to overuse parenthesis as it overthrows the flow of text.
Done
- ""Vivir lo Nuestro" is also a duet (featuring La India) that was originally recorded on the RMM Records compilation album Combinacion Perfecta." ---> ""Vivir lo Nuestro", featuring La India, was originally recorded on the RMM Records compilation album Combinacion Perfecta".
Done
- Commercial reception
- Numbers does not follow WP:ORDINAL
Done
- The second sentence could be combined with the first one
Done
- "On the Billboard Tropical Albums chart, the album debuted at #1 the week of 27 November 1999, and remained at #1 for five months" ---> "The album debuted atop the Billboard Tropical Albums chart on the week of 27 November 1999, and remained at number one for five consecutive months."
Done
- Inconsistency with dates (MMMM-DD-YYYY and DD-MMMM-YYYY)
Done
- "On the Billboard 200, the album peaked at #151. According to Billboard, this compilation was the best-selling album of 2000 on the Latin Albums and Tropical Albums charts in the United States" ----> "Desde un Principio: From the Beginning peaked at number 151 on the Billboard 200 chart and became the best-selling album of 2000 for the Top Latin Albums and Tropical Albums charts."
Done
- I believe it would be best to add what is a gold certification.
- I added an internal link in "certified gold" to Music recording sales certification. Is that alright?
- Critical reception
- "Promise" remove the "e" ;)
Done I "promise".
- Billboard is a printed source, needs italicizing pronto .
Done
- Tracklisting
- Ref needed (Allmusic)
Done
- References
- FN#1 publisher?
Done
- FN#3, FN#4, FN#5, FN#6, FN#7, FN#8, FN#16 Allmusic is a website, link Allmusic and Rovi Corporation in FN#3
Done
- FN#9 wikilink Amazon.com
Done
- FN#10 wikilink Billboard
Done
- Inconsistency with publisher(s) of Billboard magazine (Nielsen Business Media, Inc vs. Nieslon Company vs. Prometheus Global Media)
Done
- Putting the article
On hold until these issues have been dealt with. Best, Jonatalk to me 21:13, 30 September 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! Erick (talk) 03:54, 1 October 2012 (UTC)
- You're welcome =) I had fixed some minor things on the article and it is now ready for GA status. Great work! Jonatalk to me 14:01, 1 October 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! Erick (talk) 03:54, 1 October 2012 (UTC)
