Talk:Der Herr ist mein getreuer Hirt, BWV 112/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:24, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Coming to this soon. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:24, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• "Chorale cantata" is linked twice

removed one, but linked 2nd cycle

• "Movement" may be linked

yes --GA

History

• the Lord as the good shepherd May be "good shepherd" should be in title case?

fine --GA

• While during the cycle...paraphrase of Psalm 23 A long long line, I think we can split and rephrase this for clarity. I can give a suggestion, but first tell me who "he" refers to in "he used the hymn text here unchanged".

split --GA

Rest looks good to me. Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 11:56, 11 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you, a fourth time! You are amazing! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:00, 13 June 2016 (UTC)

Happy to promote. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:55, 13 June 2016 (UTC)