Talk:Der 100. Psalm/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:11, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
I will review this article. MWright96 (talk) 15:11, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
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- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
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- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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History
[edit]- "beginning on 24 April 1908 and working on it until the beginning of July that year." - worked
- good catch, was kindly changed already --GA
- "Part I was first performed on 31 July 1908 for the university anniversary." - university's anniversary
- same --GA
- Reger received an honorary doctorate from the Jena University. - honourary doctorate
- done --GA
- Remove the second wikilink of Leipzig
- done --GA
Structure and scoring
[edit]- "A short instrumental introduction, marked Andante sostenuto," - I think either marked by or marked in is more accurate
- Sorry, but I have not seen that in six years of writing on classical compositions. --GA
Jauchzet
[edit]- "The treatment of the line has been regarded as an "orchestral explosion"," - regarded by whom? Also the comma should be a period.
- I will think about dropping it, because it may hold up the flow too much to explain. --GA
- I tried now to say who, could add a date and location if wanted. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:30, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
- I think that would be unncessary. MWright96 (talk) 06:41, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
- "marked sostenuto and pp." - same point as in the Structure and scoring section
- same answer --GA
- "marked espressivo und crescendo." - and
- another good catch, thank you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:10, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
Erkennet
[edit]- "with a solo violin picturing the "sheep of his pasture"." - needs a citation
- will look, but don't immediately recall where I read that --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:12, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
- found it --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:35, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
Gehet zu seinen Toren ein
[edit]- "The key of F-sharp minor and a triple meter are intruduced by the orchestra." - typo
- found it fixed already --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:13, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
Denn der Herr ist freundlich
[edit]- "The climactic ending has been regarded as a "gloriously polychromatic form"." - regarded by whom?
- same as above --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:13, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
Versions
[edit]- "François Callebout wrote an organ version that was published in 2004 in by Dr. J. Butz." - remove the second instance of the word "in"
- done --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:14, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
References
[edit]Good work so far. On hold until the points have been actioned. MWright96 (talk) 17:08, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for good reading. I was happily away singing the piece. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:16, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
- Good work. Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:41, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for good reading. I was happily away singing the piece. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:16, 29 August 2016 (UTC)