Talk:Denny Substation/GA1
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Reviewer: CycloneIsaac (talk · contribs) 19:45, 27 March 2017 (UTC)
Reviewing later.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 19:45, 27 March 2017 (UTC)
- The lead does feel a bit short for the size of the article. Maybe add a bit more of the history to the lead?
Done.
- Any sources on Walsh Construction being the main contractor? (Maybe mention it outside the infobox?)
- Added it to the body with a source.
- Day 1 is the HQ of Amazon.com.
- Bezos's office is in Day 1, but the entire 5-building complex will be the headquarters when completed.
- My mistake then.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 21:15, 1 April 2017 (UTC)
- Bezos's office is in Day 1, but the entire 5-building complex will be the headquarters when completed.
- How reliable is Slate?
- Slate, being a web magazine rather than a website, definitely fits the reliability criteria with its use of professional editors and writers.
- Good enough.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 21:15, 1 April 2017 (UTC)
- Slate, being a web magazine rather than a website, definitely fits the reliability criteria with its use of professional editors and writers.
@CycloneIsaac: Sorry for the late reply, but I've finally found time this week to work on this. SounderBruce 09:01, 1 April 2017 (UTC)
- Passing.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 21:15, 1 April 2017 (UTC)
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