Talk:Denmark at the 1968 Winter Olympics
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Reviewer: Usernameunique (talk · contribs) 02:51, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
Lead
- The events should be listed
- All six of them? That would seem to be too much for the lead?
- "The men both competed in the 15 and 30 km races; Kirsten Carlsen competed in the 5 and 10 km races. She had the best performance of any of them with her 32nd-place finish in the 10 km event."
- Elegant, done. Courcelles (talk) 06:12, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
Background
- How many countries/athletes?
- Added. Courcelles (talk) 05:14, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
- What's Denmark's medal history?
- Added... Courcelles (talk) 05:14, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
- What was the 1998 medal for? The link doesn't mention it.
- Curling. Added. Courcelles (talk) 06:12, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
- Any word on the closing ceremony?
- Nope, as is typical this far back. Courcelles (talk) 05:14, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
Cross-country skiing
- "run the same two races" — one doesn't run on skis.
- fixed. Courcelles (talk) 05:14, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
- Silver/bronze for all four events?
- Added. Courcelles (talk) 05:14, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
- Were Svend Carlsen's places (57, 53) really identical to his places in 1964? That's striking if so, and should be added.
- They were, but how to phrase it is something I'm having trouble with. Courcelles (talk) 05:14, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
- "Out of 63 classified finishers Lynge was in 62nd place and Carlsen in 53rd. Carlsen's 57th- and 53rd-place finishes were identical to his ranks in the same races four years before."
- Added. Courcelles (talk) 06:12, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
- "Carlsen was in 54th" — conflicts with the chart.
- In the chart, do you mean to use apostrophes to separate hours from minutes?
- Oh, I didn't much look at the pre-existing chart. That's a bad convention, changed. Courcelles (talk) 05:14, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
Another one, Courcelles. --Usernameunique (talk) 02:51, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
- Responses to everything, would like to hear your thoughts on how to mention Svend's same places that doesn't sound stupid, but I'm lost for it. Courcelles (talk) 05:14, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
- Courcelles, three comments above. --Usernameunique (talk) 05:56, 11 August 2018 (UTC)