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wording changes needed
[edit]Hi Kges1901, thank you for developing this article. There are a couple sentences that need clarification:
- For "...with mines every 1200-1500 meters for every kilometer" doesn't quite make sense. Do you mean, instead: "...with 1200-1500 mines for every kilometer"?
- For "However, the results of the offensive were most, and the objectives of the Northwestern Front were not achieved." something is left out. What do you mean about the results of the offensive?
- And, the Northwestern Front is not an organization, so it does not have objectives. So do you mean "the Soviet Union's objectives for 1943 on the Northwestern Front" or something like that?
Again, thank you for your contribution. --doncram 03:41, 30 September 2015 (UTC)
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