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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 02:22, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Issues:

  • Image: Unnecessary Image; also listed for deletion
    I wouldn't call it unnecessary; the effects are discussed at length in the production section. I dropped a note on the deletion page pleading the case, so I'll keep it until consensus is reached.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:07, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Infobox: Add "running time" to the infobox
  • Lede: Link episode to List of The X-Files episodes
  • Lede: Link American to Television in the United States
  • Lede: It premiered on the Fox network on May 11, 1997 → It premiered on the Fox network in the United States on May 11, 1997
  • Lede: Add UK airing, if there is source
  • Lede: It was written by R. W. Goodwin directed by Kim Manners. → It was written by R. W. Goodwin and directed by Kim Manners.
  • Lede: Link Nielsen household rating to Nielsen ratings
  • Lede: people → viewers
  • Lede: Did Television Critics praised anything in particular, or note anything
  • Lede: Plot summary — Need much bigger plot summary at the lede section
  • Lede: Link executive producer
  • Production: Writing - Link executive producer
  • Production: Add "Casting" section, or just note the guest stars of the episode
    I'm not sure this is really necessary. Only Chris Owens is mentioned in the book I cited, and that's only really a sentence. The rest would just yield a list, like the "Guest Stars" one in the Infobox, so It'd be redundant.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:07, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Production: Add television rating in the United States, if possible
    I couldn't find this.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:07, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reception: It notes the channel in UK, but no US!, please add Fox network for the United States
  • Reception: "Demons" first aired → "Demons" was originally broadcast
  • Reception: 8 out of 10 an wrote. an → and
  • External links: Add episode link for the X-Files official website

On hold. TBrandley 02:35, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I addressed most of the issues. See my reasonings for the rest. Thanks for the review.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 04:07, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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