Talk:Deep Shadows and Brilliant Highlights/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:17, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:17, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y (Highest is 31.0%, due only to incidental parallels.) 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links Y
• No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

• Released 27 August 2001, HIM began recording demos in the fall of 2000, with producer T.T. Oksala intending to release the initial recordings as the finished album. suggest HIM began recording demos in the fall of 2000 with producer T.T. Oksala, intending to release the initial recordings as their finished album. However, the album was rejected by record label BMG, after which producer Kevin Shirley was brought in and subsequently clashed with the members of the band due to his work style. The final album was released on 27 August 2001.
• The supporting tour for Deep Shadows and Brilliant Highlights saw HIM playing the US for the first time, but overall strained the band to the point of nearly breaking up. suggest The supporting tour for Deep Shadows and Brilliant Highlights saw HIM playing in the US for the first time, but resulted in large tension between band members, to the point of nearly breaking up.
• @SilverBullitt: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:14, 2 April 2018 (UTC)