Talk:Deep Blue (great white shark)
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Suggested shortening
[edit]I think that this page could be made more concise, by taking out some of the blow-by-blow information that sounds like it came from pop culture sources. There are things like this person says one thing but that person says the opposite that go on for too long and are not needed at such length for WP:NPOV. Also, there are too many descriptions of sightings and things that were filmed. It would be better to make more use of WP:Summary style in terms of the writing style of this page. --Tryptofish (talk) 21:38, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks. I will attempt to start addressing some of these concerns. Viriditas (talk) 22:04, 2 August 2022 (UTC)