Talk:Dear Girl: Stories

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Amkgp (talk) 18:47, 6 January 2021 (UTC)

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• Dear Girl: Stories
• Masochistic Ono Band

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• ... that Masochistic Ono Band was created by voice actors Hiroshi Kamiya and Daisuke Ono through the radio program Dear Girl: Stories, with the other band members consisting of the program's writing staff? Source: Anime News Network (link): "Scriptwriter Masaru Suwa, also known as MOB member Do-S, posted an apparent response to the incident on Twitter."; Natalie (link): "MASOCHISTIC ONO BANDは、2013年に文化放送のレギュラーラジオ番組「神谷浩史・小野大輔のDear Girl～Stories～」から生まれたバンド。[Masochistic Ono Band is a band created in 2013 on Nippon Cultural Broadcasting's radio program Hiroshi Kamiya and Daisuke Ono's Dear Girl: Stories."
  • ALT1:... that the radio program Dear Girl: Stories had a film adaptation produced partly to record Masochistic Ono Band's debut music video? Source: Animate Times (link): "その後、初のオリジナル楽曲「Ace of Asia」のPV 撮影の為、香港を訪れた彼らの姿を記録した実写映画「Dear Girl～Stories～THE MOVIE2 ACE OF ASIA」が制作され、各地で好評を博した。[Afterwards, in order to film the music video of their first original song, "Ace of Asia", the live-action film Dear Girl: Stories The Movie 2: Ace of Asia, which documented the group's visit to Hong Kong, was produced and gained favorable reception.]"

Created by Lullabying (talk). Self-nominated at 09:44, 4 December 2020 (UTC).

• These two articles are new enough and long enough. The hook facts are cited inline and either hook could be used. The articles are neutral, and with the citations all being in Japanese, I unsurprisingly detected no copyright issues. No QPQs are needed on this occasion but these are your fourth and fifth DYKs, so a QPQ will be needed next time. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:15, 31 December 2020 (UTC)

• The last two sentences under the Manga section in the article Dear Girl: Stories needs to be referenced. SL93 (talk) 16:23, 1 January 2021 (UTC)

• References added. lullabying (talk) 21:20, 1 January 2021 (UTC)

• Lyllabying Thanks, but the sentence "Both adaptations were released with 4 bound volumes each by ASCII Media Works under the Sylph Comics imprint." still needs to be referenced. SL93 (talk) 21:53, 1 January 2021 (UTC)

• Each individual volume underneath was referenced, and when you click on the reference itself it does list the imprint on the page. Which reference should I use? lullabying (talk) 22:48, 1 January 2021 (UTC)

• Lullabying I went ahead and added a reference to it. SL93 (talk) 22:52, 1 January 2021 (UTC)

• Also, "the second CD was released on October 22, 2010; and the final CD was released on October 20, 2012. Dear Girl: Stories Hizuki had one audio drama CD, which was released on April 10, 2014" needs to be referenced. SL93 (talk) 21:59, 1 January 2021 (UTC)

• Sources added. lullabying (talk) 02:13, 2 January 2021 (UTC)

• Thank you. Restoring tick. SL93 (talk) 02:15, 2 January 2021 (UTC)

• Hi, I came by to promote the first alt, though I would suggest cutting off the last clause as all these facts aren't the most interesting. There is one paragraph under Discography in Dear Girl: Stories which needs at least one cite per Rule D2. Yoninah (talk) 20:37, 3 January 2021 (UTC)

Citation added. Revision of ALT1 would be "that Masochistic Ono Band was created by voice actors Hiroshi Kamiya and Daisuke Ono through the radio program Dear Girl: Stories with the program's writing staff?" lullabying (talk) 20:42, 3 January 2021 (UTC)

Pinging Yoninah just in case. SL93 (talk) 20:45, 3 January 2021 (UTC)

• No, this is what I meant:
• ALT3: ... that Masochistic Ono Band was created by voice actors Hiroshi Kamiya and Daisuke Ono through the radio program Dear Girl: Stories?
• As you can see, SL93, this hook is not going to get many hits. Yoninah (talk) 20:48, 3 January 2021 (UTC)

• Yoninah I agree because there would need to be prior knowledge of who the voice actors are. Though I can't really find anything more interesting from the articles. SL93 (talk) 20:50, 3 January 2021 (UTC)

• You're right. If the nominator can't add any more interesting details, I guess we should say:
• ALT4: ... that Masochistic Ono Band was created as the house band for the radio program Dear Girl: Stories? -- Bleh. Yoninah (talk) 20:56, 3 January 2021 (UTC)

Both Hiroshi Kamiya and Daisuke Ono starred in Durarara!!, so maybe something like ALT5: ... that Masochistic Ono Band was created by two voice actors of Durarara!! as the house band for their radio program Dear Girl: Stories? lullabying (talk) 21:20, 3 January 2021 (UTC)

• That sounds better, thanks. SL93, could you review ALT5? Yoninah (talk) 21:26, 3 January 2021 (UTC)

• Yoninah ALT5 doesn't work because Durarara!! isn't mentioned in either article. SL93 (talk) 21:46, 3 January 2021 (UTC)

• Back to you, Lullabying. Yoninah (talk) 21:48, 3 January 2021 (UTC)

Then I guess ALT6: "... that Masochistic Ono Band was created by two Japanese voice actors as the house band for their radio program Dear Girl: Stories?" lullabying (talk) 21:55, 3 January 2021 (UTC)

That sounds like the best we have so far. Approving ALT6. SL93 (talk) 04:21, 5 January 2021 (UTC)