Talk:Days of Wine and D'oh'ses/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:47, 9 September 2019 (UTC)
Comments
- Where is the production code (infobox) referenced?
- The external link: "Days of Wine and D'oh'ses episode capsule". The Simpsons Archive.
- "Barney becoming sober because they did not think a sober Barney would be funny" bit repetitive with Barney and sober being used twice in quick succession.
- Reworded
- Same for " critics, including Chris Turner, have also criticized "...
- Reworded
- I don't think it's appropriate to part-link a quote as you have with the blackboard gag.
- Fixed the quote
- Two paras starting with "Meanwhile..." is repetitive.
- Fixed
- "new bike" bicycle?
- Fixed
- " leaving them in" placing them in. Or putting them in...
- Putting them
- "to do an " feels clumsy, to write an, to create an...?
- Fixed
- "He told the idea to Lacusta," -> "He told Lacusta of the idea"
- Fixed
- Our article on showrunner has it as a single word.
- Showrunner is one word
- "Alone Again, Natura-diddly" should have a capital D.
- Fixed
- Are there any viewing figures available?
- Fixed
- " have commented on Barney becoming sober. IGN staff members commented i" comment is quick-repeated...
- Fixed
- Prism Awards (prose) or PRISM Awards (ref).
- Faxed
Short and sweet, hence only a handful of reasonably straightforward comments, so I'll put it on hold while we deal with them. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 09:56, 11 September 2019 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Issues solved. AmericanAir88(talk) 20:12, 11 September 2019 (UTC)
- Article passed. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 20:32, 11 September 2019 (UTC)