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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:08, 1 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Will review this person. MWright96 (talk) 16:08, 1 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

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Early life and background

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  • "Dayana Yastremska was born on 15 May 2000 to Marina and Alexander Yastremsky in Odessa, the third-largest city in Ukraine" - The WTA Tennis biography source in the infobox can be used to verify Yastremska's birth date and birth place
  • "Her father had been a volleyball player and also has served on the Odessa City Council." - the text in bold can be removed
  • "After also trying other sports such as gymnastics and swimming," - "also" is unneeded
  • "She entered her first tournament when she was seven and finished in third place, despite the tournament" - close repetition of "tournament"

Junior career

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  • A thought: perhaps state what the exact names of the Grade tournaments were or where they took place?
  • "Yastremska closed out her junior career" - concluded

2015–17: Five ITF titles, first WTA match win

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2018: Maiden WTA title and top 100 debut at 18

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2019: Two WTA titles, world No. 22

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2020: First Premier final

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  • "During the event, she defeated three top 20 players, including No. 12 Aryna Sabalenka," - not mentioned by Tennis.com so another source is needed to verify this portion of information

National representation

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Playing style

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Coaches

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References

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Overall the primary issues that I found during my read-through of the article concern the prose, the verification of some material that is not covered by the sources and the lack of parameters in certain references. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 21:31, 1 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review, MWright96! I addressed all of the comments above. I agreed with most of them, and made some notes on the rest. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 22:44, 1 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Sportsfan77777: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:59, 2 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]