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I removed some information from the article on the artist's background, which I thought was superfluous. On reconsideration, I think this info could be added back, perhaps with a more clear connection to the subject of the article. I.e., "like her other works, Dawn's Landscape XL..." or "Dawn's Landscape XL reflects the artist's shift after [year x] to a brighter color palette...". Since this is a Wiki Edu article, I'll leave this as a suggestion for the time being rather than go in myself. ForsythiaJo (talk) 02:22, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]