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If a general officer is under investigation for personal misconduct and then censured shouldn’t he/she be removed from the Convening Authority/UCMJ? Please advise. Jartansmom (talk) 23:23, 4 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Some Proposed Changes

An impartial editor has reviewed the proposed edit(s) and asked the editor with a conflict of interest to go ahead and make the suggested changes.

I am proposing the following new citations for the Publications section:

• Major David Huntoon, The Aleutians, Lessons from a Forgotten Campaign, School for Advanced Military Studies, U.S. Army Command and General Staff College, Monograph #1, Spring 1988^[1]

• Williamson Murray, A Nation at War in an Era of Strategic Change, Foreword by Major General David H. Huntoon, Create Space Independent Publishing Platform, 2004^[2]

• Edward Cox, Grey Eminence: Fox Conner and the Art of Mentorship, introduction by LTG David Huntoon, New Forums Press Inc., March 2011^[3]

• Col. Robert J. Dalessandro, Army Officer's Guide: 51st Edition, Foreword by LTG David H. Huntoon Jr., Stackpole Books, 2011^[4]

• Major General Eric Bonnemaison, Thou, My Fellow Officer, Preface by Lieutenant General David Huntoon, Economica, 2012^[5]

• Col. Robert J. Dalessandro, Army Officer's Guide: 52nd Edition, Foreword by LTG David H. Huntoon Jr., Stackpole Books, 2013^[6]Tsmith47 (talk) 17:23, 10 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Tsmith47: please feel free to add those in yourself

Seagull123 Φ 13:28, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

References

^ John C. McManus (30 July 2019). Fire and Fortitude: The US Army in the Pacific War, 1941-1943. Penguin Publishing Group. pp. 855–. ISBN 978-0-698-19276-8.
^ Williamson Murray. A Nation at War in an Era of Strategic Change. DIANE Publishing. ISBN 978-1-4289-1041-6.
^ Edward Cox (13 December 2010). Grey Eminence: Fox Conner and the Art of Mentorship. New Forums Press. ISBN 978-1-58107-203-7.
^ Robert J. Dalessandro (8 December 2008). Army Officer's Guide. Stackpole Books. pp. 1–. ISBN 978-0-8117-4667-0.
^ Eric Bonnemaison (2012). Thou, My Fellow Officer. Brookings Inst Press. ISBN 978-2-7178-5974-4.
^ Col. Robert J. Dalessandro USA (Ret.) (1 September 2013). Army Officer's Guide: 52nd Edition. Stackpole Books. ISBN 978-0-8117-1188-3.

@Seagull123:Will do. Thank you for the review.Tsmith47 (talk) 17:48, 25 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Some Proposed Changes

This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered.

I am proposing the addition of the citation below to the Dates of Rank section:

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| Lieutenant General || Army of the United States || January 25, 2008^[1]Tsmith47 (talk) 19:05, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I added the citation to the rank listings and have marked this edit request as answered. This article still has many problems, as noted in the existing maintenance templates. Interested editors are encouraged to address these issues promptly. Go4thProsper (talk) 15:53, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you.Tsmith47 (talk) 16:05, 1 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

References

^ Zimmerman, Tom (February 5, 2008). "Huntoon promoted, set to direct Army staff". www.army.mil. U.S. Army. Retrieved November 10, 2020.

[McManus2019-1] John C. McManus (30 July 2019). Fire and Fortitude: The US Army in the Pacific War, 1941-1943. Penguin Publishing Group. pp. 855–. ISBN 978-0-698-19276-8.

[Murray-2] Williamson Murray. A Nation at War in an Era of Strategic Change. DIANE Publishing. ISBN 978-1-4289-1041-6.

[Cox2010-3] Edward Cox (13 December 2010). Grey Eminence: Fox Conner and the Art of Mentorship. New Forums Press. ISBN 978-1-58107-203-7.

[Dalessandro2008-4] Robert J. Dalessandro (8 December 2008). Army Officer's Guide. Stackpole Books. pp. 1–. ISBN 978-0-8117-4667-0.

[Bonnemaison2012-5] Eric Bonnemaison (2012). Thou, My Fellow Officer. Brookings Inst Press. ISBN 978-2-7178-5974-4.

[(Ret.)2013-6] Col. Robert J. Dalessandro USA (Ret.) (1 September 2013). Army Officer's Guide: 52nd Edition. Stackpole Books. ISBN 978-0-8117-1188-3.

[7] Zimmerman, Tom (February 5, 2008). "Huntoon promoted, set to direct Army staff". www.army.mil. U.S. Army. Retrieved November 10, 2020.

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