Talk:David Fletcher (baseball)/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Riley1012 (talk) 12:32, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 11:34, 11 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Sewageboy! I'll complete a review within a week. -Riley1012 (talk) 11:34, 11 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Sewageboy. I apologize for the delay. I'm about to have final exams and underestimated how much work I still have left. I will do to review this weekend. Thanks! -Riley1012 (talk) 16:26, 19 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

1. Well-written

"Fletcher was born in Orange, California and attended..." comma is needed after a state's name when the sentence continues
- Fixed Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
"...and was awarded as the WCC Defensive Player of the Year." This wording is awkward. Change to "was named the WCC Defensive Player of the Year"
- Fixed Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
"Fletcher began the 2023 season with the Angels, but went just..." comma needs to be taken out after Angels
- Fixed Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

2. Well-sourced

Ref 23 needs more information in its citation (including the website name and access date)
- Fixed Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 47 is a bare URL
- Fixed Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Refs 6, 11, 24, 34, 36, and 39 all need access dates
- Fixed Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Copyvio check good. Spot check of refs 2, 9, 21, 27, 35, 50, and 55 looks good.

Other

"Fletcher has received endorsement deals from Budweiser, Bank of America, and New Balance." This should either be expanded and made into a new section (public image or something like that) or moved into the player profile section. Endorsement deals aren't a part of someone's personal life.
- Moved to player profile section. Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Article is neutral, stable, and all images are free and relevant.

Only a few changes needed to be made, well done! -Riley1012 (talk) 13:59, 22 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Riley1012, I've made the requested changes. Let me know if any issues remain. Sewageboy (talk) 05:24, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, looks good. -Riley1012 (talk) 12:31, 23 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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