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Reviewer: TbhotchTalk C. 17:10, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

I am quick-failing the nominations, there is a lack of information. I would suggest looking at the other 291 GA or the 75 FA. Also remember to add the GA notice on the article's talkpage.

  • General
References need to go with the {{cite web}}, {{cite news}}, {{cite book}} format.
some links need update
a redirect
  • Infobox
Genres: Teen pop, R&B, pop, adult contemporary[1] -> Source states that Pop rock is the genre, the others are styles.
Reviews goes on their own section not here.
  • Lead
The lead should summarize the entire article
Gold by the RIAA -> Who is the RIAA?
released to radio on August 1. -> 2004? 2006? 2025?
In general need a copy edit.
  • Background
Missed.
  • Reception and album information
album information? where?
David Archuleta received mixed reviews from critics.[4] Reception and album information, Billboard praised David Archuleta, -> David Archuleta twice.
Neither USA Today, The New York Times nor Los Angeles Times are sourced.
The song "Desperate" is a cover of the German band Stanfour. -> [citation needed]
  • Singles
at #2 on the Billboard Hot 100 -> at number two on the Billboard Hot 100
sold almost 2 million copies in the United States. [8]

-> sold almost two million copies in the United States.[8]

on November 21, 2008 -> on November 21, 2008,
will be the next single following "Crush". -> update
On March 13, 2009, David -> On March 13, 2009, Archuleta
iTunes -> wikilink
on the Wal-mart version of David Archuleta -> Archuleta has a Wal-mart version?
paragraph unsourced.
  • Release history
Almost unsourced
  • Personnel
Missed section. This is one of the most important sections for either album article. Without it the article cannot be re-assessed further that "C-Class"
  • Chart performance
Needs expantion
U.S. Billboard Top Digital Albums and U.S. Billboard Comprehensive Albums are complementary charts, so are not needed.
  • Certifications and sales
Platinum -> Unsourced (The RIAA is the only reliable source)

If you feel this is in error, you may request a Good article reassessment or re-nominate it. TbhotchTalk C.