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Talk:Dave Mullins (freediver)

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The article as it stands is not a biography, it is simply a list of records attained. A biography should at least contain basic details such as full name, date of birth, education, first attempt in the notable field (in this case, freediving). It is also 'unencyclopedic' to title the article 'Dave', unless of course that is his official name (i.e. on his birth certificate). Assuming that his name is David, it should start by saying 'David (?) Mullins, always/usually known as Dave ...'.

Has he written anything? Has he been mentioned in any other external articles? Links to sites such as DeeperBlue, which note when records are broken? These are the things a biographical article should contain. (If these aspects are not improved, there is a chance that the article will be deleted.) --Wally Tharg (talk) 11:52, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]