Talk:Darius the Great/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tea with toast (talk) 19:29, 7 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Issues needed to be addressed before final review

References are of the 8 March 2010 version

Ref 2 is a broken link, this must be fixed, or a new source found
I am skeptical of ref 4, which refers to the book " Classic Biblical Baby Names: Timeless Names for Modern Parents". I find that such a book is not suitable for the standards of an encyclopedia. I am also doubtful that it supports the text "The generous funding of the temple gave Darius and his successors the support of the Jewish priesthood." Is there not a more appropriate source to support that sentence?

I will place this review "On hold" until the first issue is resolved and the second issue is either resolved or explained here. --Tea with toast (talk) 01:42, 9 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Understood, worked on the issues. Are they fixed? Thanks for providing me with the extra time I requested. warrior 4321 05:42, 17 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for taking care of these details. Since you found two other refs to support the statement made in #2, I think the "Baby names" book referenced should be removed entirely. Additionally, the list of book references should be alphabetized by author. --Tea with toast (talk) 17:13, 21 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Article assessment

I find that this article meets the good article criteria:

The article is well written.
The article is factually accurate and verifiable.
The article addresses the main topics in an appropriate level of detail.
The article is not biased and is written in a neutral.
The article is stable and is not undergoing an edit war.
The article contains suitable images with appropriate captions.

--Tea with toast (talk) 17:13, 21 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks a lot for the review! I am glad that this has passed GA. I will work towards making it FA, thanks again! warrior 4321 17:39, 21 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]