Talk:Darius Garland/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:24, 1 February 2019 (UTC)

Shall look into reviewing this article. MWright96 (talk) 20:24, 1 February 2019 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Early life

• Any information as to what occupation Felicia Garland holds?
• "Garland continued basketball in elementary school" - continued with
• "Garland played on a travel team against older opponents and joined an Amateur Athletic Union (AAU) team" - change to squad to avoid close reptition of the same word

High school career

• Wikilink points, rebounds, assists and steals to their respective articles for non-Basketball readers
• "drawn there by its proximity to home" - to his home
• "He averaged 27.6 points, 5.0 rebounds, 4.3 assists and 1.7 steals and captured a fourth straight state title" - , and secured
• "tying the TSSAA record" - with what team?

College career

• "He was the only freshman to make the preseason All-Southeastern Conference (SEC) team." - in the squad or the entire division?
• "he erupted for a season-high 33 points," - scored a
• Wikilink layup for our non-Basketball readers
• "Days later, head coach Bryce Drew revealed" - How many days exactly?
• Wikilink meniscus injury to Tear of meniscus

References

• Reference 7 is missing the author of the work
• References 9 and 11 are missing their respective access dates
• Reference 23 should have the Associated Press added as the agency who provided the story
• Reference 24 is missing its publication date and the author of the work

Nice work so far. Only minor quibbles are present within the article. MWright96 (talk) 11:08, 3 February 2019 (UTC)

@MWright96: I have addressed the issues pointed out. However, I could not find who already held the TSSAA record (not that important to Garland's article in my opinion) or additional information about Felicia Garland. Wisestork (talk) 16:36, 3 February 2019 (UTC)

• @Wisestork: Alright then. This article is now at GA class. MWright96 (talk) 20:48, 3 February 2019 (UTC)