Talk:Daniella Pineda/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 02:14, 27 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:55, 12 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section):

b. (citations to reliable sources):

International Business Times

c. (OR):

d. (copyvio and plagiarism):

No substantial issues.
It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects):

b. (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

One Gage Skidmore CC-licensed image.

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/fail:

Not much to do. Ping me when ready. Some copy changes and a reference that is generally unreliable. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 03:55, 12 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@An anonymous username, not my real name: The International Business Times reference still needs to be replaced. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:47, 13 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I understand; I've just been a little busy and was getting the easier stuff out of the way. An anonymous username, not my real name 05:45, 13 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Copy changes

Lead

She recently starred in the movie "Plane" as a flight attendant, with Gerald Butler as Captain. Change "recently" to 2021, wikilink Plane in italics... is mentioning Butler noteworthy here? probably not.
This is promotional garbage inserted by an IP. Removed.

Career

Executive producer Julie Plec later revealed that the character's death was not initially planned, but considered suitable for her actions in the series. Remove the comma, as there is only one subject (death). User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences
Done
Rodriguez appeared in the opening, however travel restrictions The comma should be a semicolon, and there should be a comma after however
Done

Spot checks

The International Business Times reference should be replaced, as IBTimes is generally unreliable. I see Jezebel as no consensus; is there anything better by chance?

Sammi Brie, the first IBT reference can't really be replaced with anything and the second is an extremely uncontroversial and easily verifiable statement. The Jezebel is one of two citations for the same claim, so that should suffice. An anonymous username, not my real name 23:27, 23 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@An anonymous username, not my real name The problem is that IBT is generally unreliable for any claims, even uncontroversial ones, per consensus found at WP:RSP. (Something like Jezebel is fine for an uncontroversial claim.) If you can't remove that reference, then this will fail GA criterion 2b and not be passable. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 06:35, 25 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I was able to fix it. An anonymous username, not my real name 17:42, 25 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

2: When I did finally start pursuing acting, I was really surprised to find how many casting directors told me (or gave feedback to my agents, who then told me) that I "didn't look Mexican enough." Or, "We want someone who looks more Mexican or seems more Mexican." It was such a huge eye roll. What the f--- does that mean? My initial reaction was, "Well, both of my parents are Mexican, so I don't really know how to solve that…" Both uses in one passage. Y
5: Newlyweds got a 73% from critics on RT. Also lists the guest star appearance on The Vampire Diaries. Y
10: This could be consolidated with 5, as Pineda's page also shows the rating for Mr. Roosevelt, but it does check out. Y
12: Variety article: The job would mark Pineda’s first role in a major studio movie Y
19: Deadline article: Count Jurassic World: Fallen Kingdom and Dominion actress Daniella Pineda as part of Gerard Butler’s crew in his Lionsgate action thriller The Plane. Y

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