Talk:Daniel Sprong
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:06, 12 August 2016 (UTC)
Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 08:06, 12 August 2016 (UTC)
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Lead
[edit]- "and made the Penguins immediately after being drafted." - I think you mean he made the Penguins squad
Junior
[edit]- "at ages four and five Sprong played on teams with players as old as twelve or thirteen." - a comma is missing inbetween the words five and
Sprong
- "The following season Sprong" - ditto
- "He was ultimately selected in the second round, 46th overall, by the Pittsburgh Penguins." - This statement needs a reference
Professional
[edit]- "against Ottawa Senators goalie Craig Anderson." - goaltender
Personal life
[edit]- "Sprong remains a Dutch citizen but has applied for Canadian citizenship; as of 2015 he had still not received it." - is this still the case as of 2016?
References
[edit]- no dead links
- The Guardian link should be to The Guardian (Charlottetown) and not to the national UK newspaper
- Remove link for The Guardian in reference 17
Good work so far! On hold until the points are rectified. MWright96 (talk) 09:03, 12 August 2016 (UTC)
- Nominator appears to be inactive. So I have gone ahead and made the necessary changes with these two edits 1 and 2. Article is now GA. MWright96 (talk) 07:21, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
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