Talk:Dan Osinski/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 02:22, 13 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria

1. Prose  On hold

2. Verifiability  On hold

3. Depth of Coverage  On hold

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

Comments

1.

• For ballplayers, the nationality is generally inserted into the first sentence, as well.
• Is the John Blanchard that hit the minor league home run off Osinski the same person as Johnny Blanchard? The career dates might fit.
  • Yes. Thanks for pointing that out! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 02:04, 15 May 2020 (UTC)
• The Ron Ritchie you linked to is a deceased Canadian politician, so I think you have the wrong link there.
• Might be best to have a footnote or a gloss that the spitball is an illegal pitch, that context is needed to really understand that section

2.

• Associated Press as the author on ref 31.
• You've got him as dying in Sun City in the infobox, but it's not cited there, and the text never explicity states that he died in Sun City.

3.

• Is cause of death known?
  • Obituary doesn't say, just that he died. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 02:14, 15 May 2020 (UTC)

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Really good work. Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 22:25, 14 May 2020 (UTC)