Talk:Dan French

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Neutrality

This article does need some improvement. The content relating to French's county exec race may not be relevant, and there is a subtle bias in the career section. I recommend updating the former section and editing the latter. The article has potential, but isn't there yet. Sethbwa (talk) 23:41, 23 August 2011 (UTC)Sethbwa[reply]

That's fair. I deleted inking that may have contributed to bias and removed outdated information from the section on his county executive candidacy. It's looking better. Journojunkie (talk) 16:10, 24 August 2011 (UTC)Journojunkie[reply]

It's looking pretty good, honestly. Not perfect, but good. Can someone just update the County Exec section? After that, we can remove the neutrality message. 143.229.210.120 (talk) 00:00, 2 September 2011 (UTC)CSW[reply]

The article isn't protected, you can update it yourself. GB fan please review my editing 00:09, 2 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you GB! So I updated it, and think it's looking good. I offer a motion to increase the article to class B and remove the neutrality message. 143.229.210.119 (talk) 01:32, 4 September 2011 (UTC)CSW[reply]

Sorry I've been away for a while. It looks good. I updated the county exec section to include the opponent's name -- that's important to ensuring neutrality. Beyond that, however, I second CSW's motion. Sethbwa (talk) 17:56, 4 September 2011 (UTC)Sethbwa[reply]

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