Talk:Dairy in India/GA1

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Reviewer: Векочел (talk · contribs) 00:14, 24 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Give me a few days to look at this. Векочел (talk) 00:14, 24 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for taking this on! – SD0001 (talk) 12:05, 24 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Seconded :) AleatoryPonderings (talk) 05:31, 25 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
In the lead we have Most of the milk produced comes from buffaloes; cow milk is a close second, and goat milk a distant third. Maybe the term cow should be linked? Векочел (talk) 00:18, 24 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- done. – SD0001 (talk) 12:05, 24 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Cuisine: I suggest combining the last three paragraphs into just one paragraph. Векочел (talk) 21:46, 24 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Done. AleatoryPonderings (talk) 05:25, 25 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Use of buffaloes: The Murrah is the best breed for dairy. Can you explain why Murrah is the best breed? Векочел (talk) 21:52, 24 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- I removed that because I couldn't find other sourcing about it and didn't really understand it either. (SD0001, feel free to revert if you have other sources.) AleatoryPonderings (talk) 05:28, 25 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  Re-added with better wording and sources. – SD0001 (talk) 10:04, 25 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Also in section Use of buffaloes towards the bottom: It is preferred for production of high-fat dairy products such as paneer, though cow milk is preferred for chhena. This needs a citation. Векочел (talk) 01:17, 27 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Done. AleatoryPonderings (talk) 01:55, 27 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - Ok, good to go :) Векочел (talk) 05:01, 27 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - Congrats SD0001 and AleatoryPonderings I found this an interesting article. Векочел (talk) 05:11, 27 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    - Thanks so much for your review, Векочел!! Very much appreciated :) Who woulda thunk that a miserable substub up for deletion a month ago could become a GA so quickly. Thanks again. AleatoryPonderings (talk) 05:25, 27 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    - Thanks Векочел. Any comments on the FAC-worthiness of this article? – SD0001 (talk) 09:38, 27 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      - It looks like a pretty good article. Whether it would qualify for FAC I’m not sure, the process for FAs is much more complicated. It seems to cover all major aspects about dairy in India. If you do nominate it for FA, I wish you good luck. Векочел (talk) 16:51, 27 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]