Talk:Daddy's Double/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 20:52, 4 February 2015 (UTC)

Not too many issues here.

Lead section

• "The father overhears and becomes furious before whisking his daughter away to a boarding school." I would change the to her.

Plot

• "The father refuses him and Hal is knocked down" I would remove the word him from this sentence.

Release and reception

• "The film would also be released in Great Britain on October 16, 1910." Change Great Britain to the United Kingdom.
• Link The Morning Telegraph.

References

• Link the publishers of these sources if possible.

Going to place on hold for now. good888 (talk) 12:38, 6 February 2015 (UTC)

@Good888: - All set. ChrisGualtieri (talk)

Good job as usual. Promoting to GA class. good888 (talk) 09:33, 7 February 2015 (UTC)