Talk:Cyclone Innis (2009)/GA1
GA Review
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- The first sentence of the lead needs to be what it is; it jumps right into the formation, which makes it confusing.
- Vanuatu should be linked on first appearance, rather than later on.
- A few of the comma placements are kinda odd, such as "This was because Cyclone Innis, was expected to affect the countries once it had merged with an trough of low pressure,"
Otherwise the article's good. I'll put it on hold, just fix it and I'll double-check everything and likely pass it. Wizardman 19:49, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
- All Done i think Jason Rees (talk) 20:09, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
- Looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 02:42, 11 March 2009 (UTC)
- All Done i think Jason Rees (talk) 20:09, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks Jason Rees (talk) 02:48, 11 March 2009 (UTC)