Talk:Cutbacks (30 Rock)/GA1

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Reviewer: Beloved Freak 22:01, 8 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I did a little bit of a copyedit on the plot, please cheek it's ok, specifically, I put that Jenna and Tracy "run out of his apartment" - not sure if that's the case, so please revert that if necessary!
- The plot looks good, thanks for the copy-edit. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 14:56, 9 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Could you add something on cultural references to the lead?
- IDK, this is the only thing I'm coming up with ---> "This episode of 30 Rock featured a number of cultural references to the legal crime thriller film The Pelican Brief (1993), and Liz Lemon parodying Steve Jobs's clothing attire while giving a presentation."
  - That would be fine. Although, "clothing" probably redundant to "attire". :) --BelovedFreak 16:01, 9 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
    - Oops, forgot to remove "clothing", and has been added to the lead. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 16:10, 9 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The only other request I have, is, could you add something about Steve jobs in the cultural refs section, so that the image caption isn't the only mention of that?
- Done.
  - Granted it would be virtually impossible to cite a source, but it's pretty clear she's not just parodying his attire but also his overall presentation style. I can't come up with a wording that doesn't come across as viciously mocking Steve Jobs, but it would be nice if the article reflected it. Aoystreck (talk) 02:18, 13 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Very little to do, putting it on hold. --Beloved Freak 22:01, 8 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]