Talk:Curtiss XBT2C/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 17:26, 24 December 2020 (UTC)
I'll get to this after Boxing Day. ♦ jaguar 17:26, 24 December 2020 (UTC)
- " and it made its first flight on 7 August" - I know it's 1945, but it's probably best to specify it here just in case the reader forgets through reading the whole section
- "with retractable conventional landing gear although its more powerful R-3350 engine required" - missing comma?
- "410 US gallons (1,600 l; 340 imp gal)s" - stray 's'
I'm going to pass this outright. I've read through the article twice and as evidenced from the lack of issues, it meets the GA criteria on all counts. It is comprehensive, well written and the sources of course all check out. The lead may appear short to some, but I believe it summarises the article fine without resorting to extending for the sake of it. I enjoyed reading this one. 
♦ jaguar 13:54, 31 December 2020 (UTC)