Talk:Cudi Montage/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:15, 25 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I will pick up this article for review too since I am now partly aware of West's career in 2018. I will finish this one within a few days, hopefully sooner than the last one. Carbrera (talk) 01:15, 25 December 2020 (UTC).[reply]

@Carbrera: Thank you for taking another one on; just remember that "Kiss in Songs" still needs all of the fixes to be implemented soon! --K. Peake 05:51, 25 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Does Kid Cudi need to be linked twice here? I understand that he uses two different names here, but still. Carbrera (talk) 08:40, 31 December 2020 (UTC).[reply]

Done not necessarily an overlink but it isn't really required either --K. Peake 09:02, 31 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Personally, I would link "Wyoming" too because I'd assume that most non-Americans are not familiar with it.

Not done the Jackson Hole article explains the valley is in the state, plus I have not linked it in any other West articles --K. Peake 09:02, 31 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"complemented" --> "complimented"

Done --K. Peake 09:02, 31 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Background and development

I feel as if "The song samples the work of Kurt Cobain, who both members of Kids See Ghosts had made acknowledgements of in the past" could be reworded as "The song samples the work of Kurt Cobain, who both members of Kids See Ghosts had acknowledged in the past"

Done --K. Peake 09:02, 31 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

Prose-wise, I have no concerns about this section but the first paragraph is, visibly, much longer than the others on this page. This is just a suggestion, but feel free to split into two paragraphs if you find a natural split.

Done to help make it look smoother --K. Peake 09:02, 31 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"complementing" --> "complimenting"
"overwhelemed" --> "overwhelmed"

Done for the above --K. Peake 09:02, 31 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

You could mention its chart position on the UK Streaming chart if you want

Decided not to because I don't think the chart is notable with the given context that the song charted on the main charts in numerous countries --K. Peake 09:02, 31 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Credits and personnel

I would separately link Wyoming here too

See earlier comment --K. Peake 09:02, 31 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

External links

Why is Category:Songs written by Mr Hudson included here when he is not mentioned elsewhere in the article?

Someone else must have added this a while ago and I ended up forgetting to remove it; I will do so now --K. Peake 09:02, 31 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I will place this article on hold until the comments above can be addressed. I think it is very close to meeting all of the GA criteria. Thank you. Carbrera (talk) 08:40, 31 December 2020 (UTC).[reply]

Carbrera I have responded to all of your points even if the review was later than expected; ready to pass now? --K. Peake 09:02, 31 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I will be passing this article now as I believe it meets all of the GA criteria. Thank you. Carbrera (talk) 10:36, 31 December 2020 (UTC).[reply]