Talk:Croatian submarine Velebit/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nick-D (talk · contribs) 04:47, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

Comments

This article is in very good shape, and I have only the following comments:

• The submarine is referred to as both a "ship" and a "boat": I'd suggest standardising on one term (boat is more common in English language publications, but I don't know what the norm would be for Croatia)
• "within the base" - please specify which base is being referred to here
• I've given the article a light copy edit, which I hope is OK
• I like the self-created photos! Nick-D (talk) 05:03, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

I've made an edit so it uses "boat" through the entire article; that sounds about right considering submarines are almost always referred to as boats. I've also added "within the Lora naval base" to specify its current location. Feel free do edit anything you think is needed or just let me know, and thanks!--Saxum (talk) 12:54, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

That looks good to me, and I'm pleased to pass this nomination. Nick-D (talk) 01:06, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

Thanks!--Saxum (talk) 10:24, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

Assessment

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. Has an appropriate reference section:

   B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail: