Talk:Crimean campaign (1646)
Rewriting the article.
[edit]Hello @Diannaa
i rewrote the article in order to avoid copyright issues you can find my edited article here [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Crimean_campaign_(1646)&diff=prev&oldid=1176666040]
Let me know if there's any issues. Regards. عبدالرحمن4132 (talk) 06:09, 23 September 2023 (UTC)
- You are still essentially presenting the same ideas in the same order using very similar wording. It's too closely paraphrased. Please describe the events in your own words, — Diannaa (talk) 11:06, 23 September 2023 (UTC)
- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Crimean_campaign_(1646)&diff=prev&oldid=1177213124
- i have written the article again, let me know what you think. Regards. عبدالرحمن4132 (talk) 18:30, 26 September 2023 (UTC)