Talk:Craig B. Thompson
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Improving the article
[edit]I've been working on an expanded and slightly reorganized version of the article in my sandbox. I broke up the biography section into more clearly defined sections and added more references where I could find them. Would anyone mind taking a look at my new draft? I have a COI with Memorial Sloan Kettering.--FacultiesIntact (talk) 23:57, 30 November 2017 (UTC)
For the sake of clarity, I've outlined the specific changes below:
- Removed the hyphens from "Memorial Sloan Kettering"
- Reorganized the biography section so it reads chronologically, rather than beginning with his position at MSK and his affiliation with UPenn
- Moved content from biography section into "Other roles," "Past roles," and "Awards and honors" sections for clarity
- Removed line about having published more than 350 peer-reviewed articles, as it’s fluff and hard to support and maintain
- Expanded "Scientific career" section into "Scientific contributions and patents," and added references to better support the content
- Retitled "Dispute with University of Pennsylvania" section as Criticism