Talk:Corinna/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kingsif (talk · contribs) 07:19, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I'll be reviewing this, I should be posting comments tomorrow! Kingsif (talk) 07:19, 12 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lead good length for article
Very well written in a considered voice - neutral but interesting
Informative in a tone appropriate for subject
Good progression of information through paragraphs and sections
Not much to say as it is consistently well-written:
- there are no visible issues with grammar
- language is good and voice is strong
- reads well throughout
Very well done
Pass

Lead good length, comprehensive on the main issues regarding the subject which also double as a summary of her biography
Concise with good depth on the subject and her works; additional information included contextualizes the subject and is only to the article's benefit
Would perhaps question if there's more comparison with Sappho/other Greek female poets? There's the Smyth note in the lead and the Skinner note on women's poetry, but if her work is of interest because she is one of few female poets with preserved work, is there not more on the comparisons?
- Looking through the edit history, more on this was added shortly before nom; with such good research in the article I am assuming if there was more available on comparisons it would have been added then.
Pass