Talk:Cop in the Hood

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I feel like the word police officer is too repetitive in the first sentence. I think this would be a good place to start smoothing out. Cameronpage25 (talk) 02:57, 26 September 2014 (UTC

I made some adjustments to the two beginning sentences. The rest of the article is one long run-on sentence. It needs to be broken up, re-worded a little, and it needs some meat. Cameronpage25 (talk) 03:08, 26 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]

The definition of homicide could use a little help.Cj2300 (talk) 14:26, 26 September 2014 (UTC)Marquel HolmesCj2300 (talk) 14:26, 26 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]

The edit I was going to make was not a legitmate correction, and Homicide is actually the name of recommended book to read in-order for a better understanding of the book Cop in The Hood. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cj2300 (talk • contribs) 14:53, 26 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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Cameronpage25 Be sure to refer to authors with their last names (e.g., Moskos instead of Peter). Also, Cameronpage25 and cj2300 when posting on the talk page, create a new section and then post your comment, unless you're replying to someone else. Profmwilliams (talk) 22:15, 26 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]