Talk:Cool the Earth

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Your article is concise, well written, and uses its references well. I think linking “San Francsico Bay Area” to its wiki page (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/San_Francisco_Bay_Area ), could be useful here in adding to the context in which Cool the Earth is coming up. Bacich Elementary also has a webpage (http://www.kentfieldschools.org/bacich/site/default.asp ), so linking to the school also be useful.165.124.215.95 (talk) 00:17, 13 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

In your history section I noticed some grammatical errors; there were times when you spoke in past tense, and then you changed to present tense in the same sentence. For example "they were surprised by what they learn" should be changed to "learned". I also think the last two sentences could possibly be placed in a new section...maybe "accomplishments" or something like that? Or maybe it would fit better in the Program section? Lconnell717 (talk) 00:00, 13 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I expanded the history section from a couple of sentences to a whole paragraph. Bubbles05 (talk) 01:00, 6 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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