Talk:Cool Papa Bell/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 21:25, 6 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I will do this review.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:25, 6 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

There is one disambiguation issue that needs to be addressed according to the dab item in the toolbox to the right.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:31, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
There is one external link issue that needs to be addressed according to the external links item in the toolbox to the right.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:31, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

WP:LEAD

It seems to me that the you should say how many team championships and individual statistical championships he won (especially Triple Crowns).--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:50, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Name the leagues he played in and teams who is considered closely affiliated with.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:52, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Later life and legacy

link Mississippi Sports Hall of Fame, and Little League World Series.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:50, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"fifth Negro league player" - Who were the first four?--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:50, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

At 9.6 KB, I consider this article quite thin and failing the WP:WIAGA comprehensiveness. There are books written on this subject (ISBN-10: 0823934748, ISBN-13: 978-0823934744). There are also lots of books on Negro League baseball that have stories about Bell. The prose does not even mention that he was a switchhitter. I also believe that he was highly regarded for his bunting ability. Start with the results of the Cool Papa Bell google book search. This will provide a lot of material to expand the text.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:05, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I can do that. I appreciate your time, Tony. EricEnfermero ^HOWDY! 05:16, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]