Talk:Construction of the Trans-Alaska Pipeline System/GA1
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First feedback: The lead is too short. Make it summarize this article. You might just be able to use the construction section from the Trans-Alaska Pipeline System article as a base and work from there.
Referencing and images look fine so far. No obvious issues with the prose. Will give a full review once the lead is expanded. Jclemens (talk) 03:53, 24 August 2009 (UTC)
Good job.
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- Thanks for fixing up the lead, looks great now.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- Excellent referencing
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- This really is better as a breakout article than as a humongous section of the Trans-Alaska Pipeline System article.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Good
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- People have come here to help, but nothing is disputed. Pretty tranquil topic, really.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Great selection of images, in both variety and placement, although I did move one image.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Good job. Your hard work to peel this out and into its own article is appropriately rewarded with promotion to GA status Jclemens (talk) 02:03, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: