Talk:Constantine (Briton)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: SpartaN (talk · contribs) 07:25, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Hopefully later today, probably Friday. SpartaN (talk) 07:25, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Images are good, it's factually accurate and verifiable, definitely broad, represents different view points on the subject, and is stable. I do have a few prose suggestions:

"Cultus" - should be in italics, because it's Latin.
"A number of other traditions attested across Britain describe saints or kings name Constantine, suggesting a confusion and conflation of various figures." - does it mean to say the traditions "describing saints or kings named Constantine"?
"The church in Govan in present-day Scotland was also dedicated to a Saint Constantine." - should be "The church in Govan, a parish in present-day Scotland, was also dedicated to a Saint Constantine." Looks better than "..in Govan in.."

Good work. I thought I had work today and didn't. Plus, I happen to be familiar with Geoffrey and some of the other sources so that saved some time. The article was in pretty good shape, and I had to really nitpick here. There were a few places that word order looked odd, but I think it's just me. The prose will pass after you do the above. SpartaN (talk) 08:42, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

All taken care of, thanks SpartaN. Anything else that you see?--Cúchullain ^t/c 15:41, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. Passing now. SpartaN (talk) 16:22, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]