Talk:Conductores de Venezuela

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Review: August 4, 2022. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

Passed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:13, 4 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 02:15, 1 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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@Kingsif: Very few changes are needed to pass. 7-day hold. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 02:26, 1 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Copy changes

Change the semicolon after "Synthesis of the Arts" to a comma; back half is not a complete sentence.
"Monocooking" isn't an English word. Some of my searches for monococción indicate the correct translation would be single-firing (Single-fire process is a redirect).
Remove comma after "since its construction".
Remove comma after "as a painter".

Source spot checks

(Only three given the small number of sources)

[6] Y BBC Mundo: "...la Universidad Central de Venezuela en Caracas, la universidad pública más importante del país, y donde fue profesor." Also supports the Rivera-related claims.
[8] Y Cerámica Carabobo site notes the use of single-firing ovens
[11] Y AP report quotes him as saying “Este mural se adueñó de mi corazón”

Other

Earwig shows no issues.
Run IABot. The one from Cerámica Carabobo is dead but archived, so this is needed.
Images are all freely licensed and Venezuela has FoP.
Two of the three images need alt text, though "Refer to caption" will suffice. (There is an |alt= parameter in {{Wide image}}.)

@Sammi Brie: Quicker than I thought, though IABot is down for me so I haven't managed to do that, but can hopefully get to it manually soon. Other points done. Kingsif (talk) 05:48, 4 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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