Talk:Cold Water (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:17, 3 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi there, Hurrygane! I sadly have to fail this nomination due to multiple reasons. The lead section is very short and somewhat chaotic; it should encompass following information: name, artists, date of release, a bit of the background, composition, critical reception, music video and its background, accolades?, commercial performance + certifications. I also feel that overall the article could be expanded much more, especially during the "Composition" and "Critical reception" sections. This song that I have brought to GA status was by far not as successful as "Cold Water" but has more content. Plus some references are not correctly formatted. With this being said, I encourage you to expand the article, check the GA criteria and request a copy-edit to be done to the article before re-nominating it for GA. Please don't feel discouraged, but as this stands now, it can't be promoted. Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:30, 4 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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