Talk:Colby Cave
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 10:38, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
- I'll review this later. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 10:38, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
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[edit]Colby and his sister Taylor Cave
- you can remove the Cave part after TaylorPlaying with the Battlefords Bantam AA Baron
, please begin the sentence withWhile
- You start two back-to-back sentences with
Going into the
, please replace at least one of these - Are two references necessary for the first sentence of the Boston Bruins section? I think just one will do, just trying to reduce WP:OVERCITE.
- The SI reference mentions that he was an undrafted free agent, the NHL press release does not. Kncny11 (shoot) 20:53, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
- Can you add a bit more detail for his first career NHL goal (ie. His goal came with 26 seconds left in the second period -mentioned in source)
- The 2018–19 NHL season is Wikilinked twice, please remove the second wikilink in the Oilers section
- Some of the references are archived while others are not
- Done Only saw one that wasn't archived and took care of it manually Kncny11 (shoot) 20:53, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
- You may wish to add something about the most recent Cave memorial [1] but it's not neccessary.
- I believe I did? It's the second paragraph of the Memorials subhead Kncny11 (shoot) 20:53, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
- Kncny11 The link is for 2021, you only mention 2020 events. The link I posted is about the Oilers loss, which they said was due to the Cave memorial HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 08:51, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
- HickoryOughtShirt?4 I think there's some confusion. The paragraph beginning "In lieu of a large funeral" described the 2021 memorial and McDavid subsequently questioning the NHL. I clarified in the paragraph that all of those events were in 2021, and that the Oilers lost that game 5-0. Kncny11 (shoot) 17:59, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
- Kncny11, I must be very out of it, sorry . I am passing this now. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 18:04, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
- HickoryOughtShirt?4 Absolutely no worries! Reading the paragraph back, I could see where it wasn't immediately obvious when the events were taking place. Just glad I could get the article up to snuff, considering how tragic the story is. Kncny11 (shoot) 18:16, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
- Kncny11, I must be very out of it, sorry . I am passing this now. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 18:04, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
- HickoryOughtShirt?4 I think there's some confusion. The paragraph beginning "In lieu of a large funeral" described the 2021 memorial and McDavid subsequently questioning the NHL. I clarified in the paragraph that all of those events were in 2021, and that the Oilers lost that game 5-0. Kncny11 (shoot) 17:59, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
- Kncny11 The link is for 2021, you only mention 2020 events. The link I posted is about the Oilers loss, which they said was due to the Cave memorial HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 08:51, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
- I believe I did? It's the second paragraph of the Memorials subhead Kncny11 (shoot) 20:53, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
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