Talk:Cody Ross/GA1
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Reviewer: Sportsguy17 (talk · contribs) 21:55, 1 March 2014 (UTC) I'm here again to review another one of your fine-looking articles. I'll leave initial thoughts shortly. Sportsguy17 (T • C) 21:55, 1 March 2014 (UTC)
Most of the issues I see involve grammar, not content that is or isn't there, so only minor changes will be made and here it is section-by-section:
- Lead
- Change "He stands 5 feet 10 inches (1.78 m) tall and weighs 195 pounds (88 kg)" to "He is 5 feet 10 inches (1.78 m) tall and weighs 195 pounds (88 kg)".
- Change "He was traded to the Los Angeles following spring training in 2004..." to "He was traded to the Los Angeles Dodgers following spring training in 2004".
- The rest of the lead looks good.
- Early life
- This section is all good.
- Minor League career (1999-2005)
- This section is all good.
I will stop here for now. Make the clubs and teams he was on Level 3 headings and add a Level 2 heading called Major League career like you have for other GA's you worked on. Sportsguy17 (T • C) 16:37, 2 March 2014 (UTC)
First round of changes made @Sportsguy17:. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 12:18, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
- OK. I do not see any other issues with the article, so I am passing it. Good work. Sportsguy17 (T • C) 23:13, 4 March 2014 (UTC)