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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:35, 16 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'll be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:35, 16 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@TheDoctorWho: Sorry about the week delay. I have been unexpectedly busy. I will be free this Sunday so expect comments by then. Again, sorry for the delay. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 22:36, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
No worries, I've been pretty preoccupied with my FAC lately so it works out. TheDoctorWho (talk) 02:26, 25 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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  • The first sentence has a lot of commas. Try removing some.
  • All plot summaries are less than 200 words so they pass MOS:TVPLOT.
  • The second episode's summary has the phrase "in order to" three times.
  • Netflix is linked twice in #Development (MOS:DUPLINK).
  • Netflix is linked again in #Awards_and_nominations (MOS:DUPLINK).
  • Disney+ is linked twice in #Awards_and_nominations (MOS:DUPLINK).
  • "On May 9, 2019" – the cited source is from May 2
  • "Later that month" – the cited source is from the following year
  • Add a serial comma between "Josh Heald, Jon Hurwitz and Hayden Schlossberg".
  • Add a serial comma between "Will Smith, James Lassiter and Caleeb Pinkett".
  • "seasons release" → "season's release" (American English)
  • "thorughout" – typo
  • Add a MOS:GEOCOMMA after "Marietta, Georgia".
  • Add commas after "Later that month" and "June 2020".
  • Add a comma after "As part of the move".
  • Add a comma after "Rotten Tomatoes".
  • Remove the comma after "90% approval rating".
  • Add a comma after "MTV Movie & TV Awards".
  • Add a comma after "Screen Actors Guild Awards".
  • ScreenRantScreen Rant
  • AV ClubThe A.V. Club
  • Mark references from The Telegraph with "|url-access=registration".
  • SalongSalon
  • Sources from The Futon Critic can only be archived through https://archive.ph/.

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed