Talk:Club Harlem/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:11, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 08:11, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
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History
[edit]- "Williams was a medical student at Penn" - change to University of Pennysylvania Done
- "It came to be considered the "Cotton Club" of Atlantic City." - who exactly considered this point?
- I've reworded this as the ref doesn't indicate who. We hope (talk) 14:01, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
- "and arrested 32," - I'm guessing 32 people or employees? Done
- Adelaide, Australia is a dab link Done
- Change Northeastern US to Northeastern United States and wikilink it for accessability Done
Shows
[edit]- "The music played from 10 pm Saturday night to 6 am Monday morning." - change 10pm and 6am to 10 p.m and 6 a.m for consistency Done
- "Long time Atlantic City disc jockey Pinky Kravitz recalled that by 3AM," - ditto Done
- "in New York City for 6 months" - spell out 6 Done
- "and then in the summer play at the Club Harlem" - perform would be better since play is mentioned previously in the sentence this is in Done
- "to sing with Sammy Davis, Jr., and sang with Davis," - reptition of sing/sang Done
Final years and demolition
[edit]- I don't think easter should be linked since it's a common term. Also the same issue is present in the lead Done
References
[edit]Nice work by everyone who worked on this article. On hold until my points have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 13:13, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks again We hope for taking action quickly. Article is now GA. MWright96 (talk) 14:12, 29 August 2016 (UTC)