Talk:Cliché (Hush Hush) (song)/GA1

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Reviewer: The Almightey Drill (talk · contribs) 19:42, 9 July 2016 (UTC)

Hello CNF! Although I am not perfectly familiar with the subject, I will evaluate what you have written in accordance with the general rules, and hope that it passes! '''tAD''' (talk) 19:42, 9 July 2016 (UTC)

Just a note: I have a different reviewing style to some others, in that I correct what I know I can correct, like spellings, because I don't find it useful to tell others to insert commas. However, if there is something which I don't understand or means two things, I will ask you to solve it. '''tAD''' (talk) 19:50, 9 July 2016 (UTC)

Query:

"Alvaro from Spanish music website Popelera compared the dance style of the track to that of its predecessor, "Lemoande" (2012)"

In English, "to compare" can mean two almost opposite things: there is when the two things are like each other (a synonym is liken), and comparing two things that are entirely different. When I look at the source, I see that Stan is "[returning] to dance music after the promotion of her single 'Lemonade'". That suggests to me that the writer is saying that "Lemonade" sounds different to this song. This could be made clearer. '''tAD''' (talk) 20:00, 9 July 2016 (UTC)

On reference 5, I am told that the website is offline. I don't know if this is temporary or that it is shut down forever, but it would be better to find an archive of the link. I'm not skilled enough to know how to do that, but I've seen it done on thousands of pages, so someone will know. '''tAD''' (talk) 20:04, 9 July 2016 (UTC)

This is an issue for any reference from the same website '''tAD''' (talk) 20:07, 9 July 2016 (UTC)

Everything else checks out, these are the only issues. Putting on hold '''tAD''' (talk) 20:20, 9 July 2016 (UTC

@The Almightey Drill: All  Fixed. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 23:55, 9 July 2016 (UTC)