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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 10:16, 26 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

This shouldn't take too long --K. Peake 10:16, 26 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • "who wrote it with" → "who served as co-writers with"
  • "that stops from being free." → "that stops their freedom." to be less repetitive
  • Change to positive reactions part to a few music critics
  • Change on 8 July to alongside the single release

Background and composition

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  • "that stops from being free." → "that stops them from being free."

Reception

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  • "garnered positive receptions from some" → "was met with positive receptions from a few"
  • "music stops playing."" → "music stops playing"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • "will keep you dancing."" → "will keep you dancing"."
  • "because of the artists […]."" → "because of the artists"."
  • "The was listed at" → "The song was listed at"

Music video

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  • "and followed by a shot of" → "and then a shot of"
  • "on a runway and" → "both on a runway and"

Charts

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  • Good

Release history

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  • Good

References

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Final comments and verdict

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