Talk:Christmas Scandal/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 18:37, 16 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I am reviewing this article and became hung up on this in the plot: "Soon after, Ann is horrified to discover that a news crew secretly followed Dexhart to her home and took a photograph of the meeting, resulting in speculation that Ann is Leslie's lesbian lover." Isn't Dexhart a guy? Why was Dexhart at Ann's home, and why does that show that Ann is Leslies's lesbian lover? (Sorry for being so dense.)

Not dense at all, I didn't explain it clearly enough. Is it better now? — Hun ter Ka hn 19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"who revised his recurring role as Dave Sanderson" - do you mean reprised his recurring role?
- Yep. I fixed it. — Hun ter Ka hn 19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"Commentators said NBC may have been received a boost in the ratings due to repeats on ABC on December 10" - how do repeats increase ratings?
- I tried to clarify. — Hun ter Ka hn 19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"but was kept together by a number of strong comedic moments and subplot, including the parks department splitting Leslie's work, the April and Andy subplot and the scenes between Leslie and Dave" - could you clarify this?
- Better? — Hun ter Ka hn 19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Xtzou (Talk) 19:06, 16 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review! — Hun ter Ka hn 19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, you clarified everything. Nice work. Xtzou (Talk) 19:51, 16 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:

B. MoS compliance:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources:

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:

B. Focused:
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail: Pass!

Congratulations! Xtzou (Talk) 19:54, 16 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]