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GA Review

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Reviewer: Nehme1499 (talk · contribs) 18:57, 29 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Hi, I'll take care of this nomination. This is my first review, hopefully it goes well for both of us :) Nehme1499 18:57, 29 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Okay thank you, it's very thorough. I have addressed those points now.--EchetusXe 02:01, 30 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Perfect, I've also cleaned up a couple of details. With the changes made, I'm happy to promote the article :) Nehme1499 13:48, 30 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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Infobox

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Lead

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  • I would add "professional" between English footballer, as it's standard to do so for professional footballers.
  • Change as a defender to as a left-back, in line with the infobox.
  • before earning a contract with AFC Wimbledon. Add "senior" or "professional" before contract, to emphasise that he didn't move to another youth team.
  • He was signed by Championship club Coventry City for an undisclosed fee: no need for "for an undisclosed fee", can be just kept in the main body of the article.
  • I would link the seasons (for e.g. 2010–11 season), to their respective club seasons (2010–11 Coventry City F.C. season). Same goes for the league seasons.
  • The lead is generally good, though I think it's slightly overly-detailed. Try to cut down a bit. For example, He helped Cheltenham to reach the play-offs at the end of the 2019–20 season, though they were eliminated at the semi-final stage. The club went on to win promotion as League Two champions in 2020–21, with Hussey featuring 48 times can by changed to something like He helped Cheltenham to reach the play-offs at the end of the 2019–20 season; they won promotion the following season as League Two champions. I think the two paragraphs should be halved.
  • Also, I don't think specific apps are necessary in the lead, except in the first instance (Despite ongoing injury issues he managed to make 31 appearances). You could generally replace those with "as a starter".

Career

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AFC Wimbledon
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Coventry City
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AFC Wimbledon (2)
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Burton Albion
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Bury
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Sheffield United
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Cheltenham Town
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Port Vale
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International career

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Style of play

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Personal life

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Career statistics

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References

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Images

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  • I know that finding images for footballers can be very difficult, so the lack of them won't impact the review. Still, did you try searching in free-to-use websites, such as flickr?

Assessment

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail: